Last day of the summer

It was the last day of the summer holidays and my friends and I decided to out to the waterhole for one last time.  We were all swimming and jumping off the bank into the ice cold water laughing and having loads of fun enjoying the last day of the holidays.  Then suddenly the jump platform callapsed and Brylie fell and bang is head we all rushed over and saw that he was hurt and bleeding, then we help get him to the car so his mum could take him to the A&E. Later we when to see him he was ok but he now had a mean war wound and 6 stitches in his head.